Writing part2 A report Sun

 Report on adventure sports activities for young people

Introduction

The aim of this report is to suggest a number of adventure sports to encourage young people to join the club and explain how they would benefit from doing these sports.
this is okay, but too brief and simply repeats the writing task.

Which sports?

Our town is situated near the mountains so the place is in a really good location to do adventure sports activities. In my opinion, I suggest organizing rafting, climbing and skiing.

Benefits to youngsters

These activities will be very helpful to young people. First of all, they can breathe fresh air in the mountains. Also, they can relieve stress from studying and homework from school. Nowdays young people study really hard so they don’t have time to play so that they are very stressed and even weak.(run-on sentence) By doing these activities they can enjoy their extra time and make friends.

Conclusion

 These activities can be done in all four seasons. Rafting can be done part of the year and skiing the other part. Climbing could be done anytime. It will be also very interesting for young people beacause they like to go on adventures. 

 Generally well answered Sun. However, there are many small errors that bring down the overall level of this report. For example, 'stress out' has the opposite meaning that you intended.