The purpose of this report is to mention several sports, that in my opinion the town council should encourage, and to explain how young people can take advantage of these activities.
About the sports
Gijón is located by the sea and at the same time it takes little time to get the mountains. Unfortunately, the weather is not very good and the Cantábrico sea is too cold, but we could do water sports like surfing when the climate conditions were favorable. On the other hand, we could encourage free-time sports like hiking or climbing if we consider that we have wonderful mountains near the city.
How youngsters can get benefit from these activities
We all need do more exercise to feel better. Doing sport keeps us fit and it helps us to develop our skills. It would be also useful in real life. We could learn how to keep the focus on what we are doing is normally very difficult for young people.
Conclusion
It would be a good idea for the council to encourage these kinds of activities because the town is big enough to benefit from it if we really want to enjoy it. Doing sports like surfing or hiking, we would increase our social skills and at the same time it would be healthy for all of us.
The content and construction of your writing is very strong here Zaira, good job. This is one of your best pieces yet. A couple of things you need to work on include: punctuation (commas mostly), spelling and occasionally using expressions that are directly translated from Spanish.
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