Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Writing Part 2, a report Melanie

Report on adventure sports for young people

Introduction
The aim of this report is to suggest a number of adventure sports which young people would be interested in and how they would benefit from doing these sports.
Good intro

Which sports?
The sport club is situated in a small village with a lot of nature all around. It is the perfect place for adventure sports in the mountains such as river rafting, climbing or parachuting especially in Summer. In Winter, the sport club could offer ski tours with different levels.

Benefits to young people
Offering these kinds of activities would benefit young people to share the same interests with other people of the same age, make new friends and learn to do something as a team.

Conclusion
I recommend organising these activities at the sport club. Young people would love to do adventure sports which are not so common and they would have a lot of fun. Your sport club could be famous for all these extraordinary adventure sports.

The shape of your report is good for the most part with 4 distinct sections. I would suggest writing more than one sentence per section however. Be careful of plural nouns, these continue to be a problem.

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