Hi Anne
I'm really glad to hear that you're coming to Korea.
I suggest you that Autum is the best time to visit korea because it'll not be so
I suggest to you that autumn is the best time to visit to Korea beacuse it'll not be too
hot or cold and you can see maples (maple trees) everywhere! Red and yellow. It is so beautiful. Red and yellow colors. Those are so beautiful.
If you want to meet young people I recommend you to go (going) to high school festivals. Every autum there are high school festivals and many high school students enjoy that time while visit another high school fsetivals. If you go there, you can make many friends there. There are many concerts like music, dance and magic. Those are organized by themselves. It'll be fun :)
In the autum the weather is not so cold and hot so you just bring T-shirts with cardigans and jeans.
During the daytime it'll be cool and during the night it'll be a little cold.
Thanks for inviting korea and let me know when you're coming. If I can , I want to guid for you !
Best wishes,
Sun
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