Hi Anne
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. I advise you to go to San Francisco during the summertime. From august to october you can enjoy the hottest days in the year! But you have to take your jacket with you, because the weather can change immediately here in San Francisco! But I think that's not a big deal for you! But normally it's very warm in the afternoon.
The best opportunity to meet other people at your age is in school. If you want, I can arrange that you can go to my friend's school.
And thank you so much for your invitation! I really appreciate that. I can show you some nice places in the city, and there are a lot of them.
Let me know if you have any questions.
Yours sincerely,
Mark
Nice length and well answered in general Mark. Please pay attention to overuse of exclamation points and avoid emoticons at all times.
While it's okay to start a sentence with 'But' and 'And' occasionally, in general they should be used as conjunctions within a sentence.
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