Thank you for sending this e-mail to me.
I'm really good to hear you're coming to korea.
I think the best time in korea is spring since the weather of spring in korea is not too cold and not too hot
but very appropriate weather to look around.
If you make friends your age, I want to recommend spending time at college or going out.
The weather in spring in korea is the change of season, so you have to bring your light clothes and overcoat which you can put on in the evening.
If you decide to exact date you are coming, contact me again.
See ya~
Hyeryun
Nice writing to start out Hyeryun. One thing you need to work on is punctuation. Please go back and put periods at the end of all sentences. Also, the length of this is a bit short. Please do a word count and ensure that your writing falls into the range that is required (120-150 words for Writing Part 1 eg)
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