Hi Anne
First of all, thank you so much for your email. I am glad to hear from you and that you are coming to Switzerland. The best time to visit my country is the spring. Despite the fact that the weather is nice at this season, you should bring a jacket for the evening.
To meet people in your age you just have to go out in the evening. We don't have clubs, instead we have a lot of pubs. I am sure you will like it.
Thank you for your invitation to join your group. It would be a lot of fun and I can show you the local courts in my town. Let me know what time you will arrive at the airport so I will pick you and your friends up.
Have a good journey
Regards,
Melanie
Very nicely written overall Melanie. There are a couple of various things to work on but mostly fine.
Thank you for the corrections Melanie. One note however, please keep the font the same size as I can see the corrections you've made in blue. This will ensure that your writing remains looking natural.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Peter